[Enigma] My final script
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I wrote Logline and Synopsis. That is ‘Meet Joe black’ I wanted to make a different ending and change a little bit about characters. I wanted to change the conclusion to the story that Joe, whom she first met, did not survive, but instead rejoiced Joe, who had been the captive messenger instead of returning to the world. Because the person she loves is not a real Joe but a Joe who has a Joe appearance, even if the real Joe lived again, he would be so different from Joe that she loved and thought it would be hard to love again. But I feel it wasn’t creative. So I stopped writing This Script. A few days ago when I walking on the road, I I came up another idea. Because I met a man who painted a caricature in the street. And I have a famous Korean Drama called ‘My ID is Gangnam Beauty’ So I wrote my Script again with a new idea. I pick the Character in the drama and bring a caricature. Finally, I finished the script and Also Re-write with our members.
<Final Script: My ID is Gangnam Beauty>
Mara’s Lure
Based on My ID is Gangnam Beauty
10/23/2018
Directed by Choi Sung Bum
Play by Choi, Soo Young
Pitch
A girl with a complex on her face meets a painter on a trip and he draws her face, and her face turns beautiful.
Outline
She has been teased since she was a child because of her ugly face and tried to make it after that, but she did not succeed.
So she accidentally meets a painter while traveling and tells the painter about her troubles. And the painter said that every Friday night she would come to her house and model her to be able to draw a picture of her wishes. She stays there, works, visits her every week and becomes a model.
Characters
Soo- Main character, she has no confidence in her face. She is always confident and lives with a complex of facial features.
Painter- He is Lure. A person who wants to be a model for his painting
Soo’s Mom, Dad- They wants their daughter happy. They always worried about her.
Treatment
When Soo was a kid, she was bullied because she was ugly, and she got a complex on her face and lost a lot of confidence. So she tried to do cosmetic surgery after the ending of the surgery, and the result was not good. After that, she did not go to school, she did not come out of her room, One month later, her mother sends her a plane ticket saying she has traveled to her. At first, she refused to go to the wrong place, but she decided to leave Korea for a while because of the pressure on her surroundings. And she leaves for Spain, and at first, she stays at the hotel and spends her time staring out the window. Then one day I walk by the street and I see a man who draws a portrait, Then she talks to the man and begins to talk to him and he completes her portrait. And every Friday I come to see her and meet her and she will give me a picture model so that she can help me out of her troubles and make her beautiful. After that, she goes to his house every week and she is amazed at her appearance every morning.
#1 Soo and her mother struggle
Soo opens the door and quickly ascends the stairs.
Sue does not say anything and climbs the door.
Mom opens the door.
soo shouted to her mother go out
Mom closed the door of her room and go out.
I had no more will to live. I was sorry for my mother, but now I am sorry for my mom and that grudge has become anger. It was the beginning that my mother gave birth to me and it pushed me cruelly until now. Numerous attempts and numerous failures and frustrations with those attempts. Frustration swallowed me up. Words you’ve seen anywhere. I remembered the words. It was my situation now that I could understand it now. And I thought, if I had to get out of frustration, I would just have to swallow it and finish it. So I thought to be a prey, and I was eaten right away.
That day I woke up and was in the hospital and saw another tear of my mother. My mother ‘s tears welcomed me. I did not want to meet you anymore.
#3.
And a year has passed.
It was about a month since I left home from home. There was a plane ticket next to the water. With my mother’s horseshoe
And Soo pick up the airport ticket
She took her luggage and went out the door.
She decided to leave because she was struck by life and was frustrated because she wanted to be isolated
she entered the hotel and unpacked, sat in the window with the chair out.
I ate breakfast and sat in front of the window, but the first wind was warm and warm. So she wore her white cardigan, loosened her head and walked along the wind. The people on the street laughed and passed her, and the children with the family looked sunny. She sat on the bench. As the autumn began, the leaves sat on her legs. The tree leaves were held by hand, and the wind blew, and the leaves were blown away. She followed the leaves, and the place where the leaves stopped was in front of a tent that would paint a caricature in an alley. She was pulled by something into the tent.
Painter asks who is she and he tries to draw her.
But she doesn’t want it first, but the painter Persuade her. So she Sits down. She looked at the end of her laughing mouth and laughed unwittingly. At that moment, she felt that the laugh was too warm.
Soo smile awkward. Painter made her smiling. Painter spoke soo as Soo’s expression changed drastically. Soo tells the painter. She looks smile. Thirty minutes later, the painter handed her a piece of paper. She saw a picture and dropped her tears in the middle of her picture. He asked her to come to his house every Friday. He wants to draw her face. Then you can be beautiful Tham before.
Then the wind blew and the tent waved, and the leaf in her hand slipped out of her hand and carried over the sky.
Script
#1 Soo and her mother struggle
Soo opens the door and quickly ascends the stairs.
Mom: What happened love?
Sue does not say anything and climbs the door.
MoM: SOO?
Mom opens the door
Soo: I don’t want to tell anything. Just go out! (soo shout to her mother)
Her Mom: Hey Honey. First, we have to talk. What happen?
Soo: (Throwing her pillow) I will go out if you do not go out.
Soo: go away!!
Her Mom: Okay we’ll talk later. Please come down.
I had no more will to live. I was sorry for my mother, but now I am sorry for my mom and that grudge has become anger. It was the beginning that my mother gave birth to me and it pushed me cruelly until now. Numerous attempts and numerous failures and frustrations with those attempts. Frustration swallowed me up. Words you’ve seen anywhere. I remembered the words. It was my situation now that I could understand it now. And I thought, if I had to get out of frustration, I would just have to swallow it and finish it. So I thought to be a prey, and I was eaten right away.
That day I woke up and was in the hospital and saw another tear of my mother. My mother ‘s tears welcomed me. I did not want to meet you anymore.
#3.
And a year has passed.
It was about a month since I left home from home. There was a plane ticket next to the water. With my mother’s horseshoe
And Soo pick up the airport ticket
She took her luggage and went out the door.
She decided to leave because she was struck by life and was frustrated because she wanted to be isolated
Officer: Why do you come to the Spanish?
Soo: Just want free
Then she entered the hotel and unpacked, sat in the window with the chair out.
I ate breakfast and sat in front of the window, but the first wind was warm and warm. So she wore her white cardigan, loosened her head and walked along the wind. The people on the street laughed and passed her, and the children with the family looked sunny. She sat on the bench. As the autumn began, the leaves sat on her legs. The tree leaves were held by hand, and the wind blew, and the leaves were blown away. She followed the leaves, and the place where the leaves stopped was in front of a tent that would paint a caricature in an alley. She was pulled by something into the tent.
Painter: Who are you?
Soo: Ohh, Hello
Painter: Are you going to paint yourself? (Laughing)
She looked at the end of her laughing mouth and laughed unwittingly. At that moment, I felt that the laugh was too warm.
Soo: Oh, I want to paint. Do not you want to do more and just let me draw this leaf?
Painter: Why do not you draw your face? I am a caricaturist (again laughing) Haha
Soo: I do not want to see my face so I can hang it where
Painter: That ‘s the charm of a caricature. I do not draw the same, but trust me that you can express the person in a similar mood. I’ll paint you with the leaves. Did you come in because you believe me?
Soo: okay but please draw me differently.
Painter: sit down over there and just smiling
Soo smile awkward
Painter: haha that is a smile?
Soo: I do not know how can smiling
Painter: That’s why you think you’re not pretty. Trust me
Think about when you happy.
Soo: But I do not have a happy memory
Painter: I will not be able to do that because there is no such person. There is a happy thing to do while eating and milking, lying in the bamboo, washing and even washing once, but it is not because you do not accept happiness and you do not think happily. haha
Painter spoke soo as Soo’s expression changed drastically
Painter: I have a lot of horses originally. Haha. I just like to give advice to others.
Soo: Oh no, not because of it, but when I was really listening to you, I was thinking about it when I was happy.
Painter: Do not move, sit down.
Sue tells the painter. She looks smile.
Painter: You know, it’s nice to be able to laugh like this.
Thirty minutes later, the painter handed her a piece of paper.
She saw a picture and dropped her tears in the middle of her picture.
Painter: Is not this a picture? (Laughing)
Soo: (shaking his head) It’s not like that. I’ve never seen my face like this before, and I wanted to do it to me …
Painter: Will you tell me how to be more beautiful?
Soo: (She wonders) Yes
Painter: Could you be my picture model when I’m on time? Then you’ll probably see you change.
Then the wind blew and the tent waved, and the leaf in her hand slipped out of her hand and carried over the sky.
Script report
We decided to set up our own partners, read their scripts and feed them back. So my partner was David and he read my script and gave feedback. He was a bit awkward in the part he wanted to change a little in his script. And also he wanted to change the awkward ending in the last scene. So I tried to change the dialogue and the final scene more naturally when I wrote the script again to compensate for it. And I caught the wrong part of the spelling, and I tried to change the part as much as possible because the die log part was not really real dialogue but it was hard.
Re-write
#1 Soo and her mother struggle
Soo opens the door and quickly ascends the stairs.
Mom: Honey, what happened?
Soo doesn’t say anything and climbs the door.
MOM: SOO?
Mom opens the door
Soo: I don’t want to tell anything. Just go out! (soo shouted to her mother)
Her Mom: Hey first takes it, easy Honey. we have to talk. What happen? Something wrong?
Soo: (Throwing her pillow) I wanna go out if you do not go out. go away!!
Her Mom: Okay, we’ll talk later.okay?
I had no more will to live. I was sorry for my mother, but now I am sorry for my mom and that grudge has become anger. It was the beginning that my mother gave birth to me and it pushed me cruelly until now. Numerous attempts and numerous failures and frustrations with those attempts. Frustration swallowed me up. Words you’ve seen anywhere. I remembered the words. It was my situation now that I could understand it now. And I thought, if I had to get out of frustration, I would just have to swallow it and finish it. So I thought to be a prey, and I was eaten right away.
That day I woke up and was in the hospital and saw another tear of my mother. My mother ‘s tears welcomed me. I did not want to meet you anymore.
#3.
And a year has passed.
It was about a month since I left the hospital. There was a plane ticket next to the water. With my mother’s letter
And Soo pick up the airport ticket
She took her luggage and went out the door.
She decided to leave because she was struck by life and was frustrated because she wanted to be isolated.
Officer: Why do you come to the Spanish?
Soo: Just I want free
Then she entered the hotel and unpacked, sat in the window with the chair out.
I ate breakfast and sat in front of the window, but the first wind was warm and warm. So she wore her white cardigan, loosened her head and walked along the wind. The people on the street laughed and passed her, and the children with the family looked sunny. She sat on the bench. As the autumn began, the leaves sat on her legs. The tree leaves were held by hand, and the wind blew, and the leaves were blown away. She followed the leaves, and the place where the leaves stopped was in front of a tent that would paint a caricature in an alley. She was pulled by something into the tent.
She was watching his painting.
Painter: Who are you?
(Popping out)
Soo: Ohh, Hello (she surprised)
Painter: Are you wanna paint? (Laughing)
She looked at the end of her laughing mouth and laughed unwittingly. At that moment, I felt that the laugh was too warm.
Soo: Oh, I don’t want to paint. Just watching your painting.
Painter: Why do not you draw your face? I am a caricaturist. haha, That is the reason you come in. Isn’t it? (again laughing) Haha
Soo: I don’t want to see my face as pictured.
Painter: That ‘s the charm of a caricature. I do not draw the same, but trust me that you can express the person in a similar mood. I’ll paint you with the leaves. Did you come in because you believe me?
Soo: okay, I try to do it. but please draw me differently. please.
Painter: sit down over there and just smiling
Soo smile awkward
Painter: haha that is your smile?
Soo: I don’t know how can smiling
Painter: That’s why you think you’re not pretty. Trust me
Think about when you happy.
Soo: But I do not have a happy memory
Painter: I will not be able to do that because there is no such person. There is a happy thing to do while your eating and lying in the Bed or washing, but it is not because you do not accept happiness and you do not think happily. haha
Painter spoke soo as Soo’s expression changed drastically
Painter: I’m too talkative originally. Haha. I just like to give advice to others.
Soo: Oh no, not because of it, but when I was listening to you, I was thinking about it when I was happy.
Painter: Do not move, sit down.
Soo tells the painter. She looks smile.
Painter: You know, it’s nice to be able to laugh like this.
Thirty minutes later, the painter handed her a piece of paper.
She saw a picture and dropped her tears in the middle of her picture.
Painter: Why? Is it not good? (Laughing)
Soo: (shaking her head) It’s not like that. I’ve never seen my face like this before, and I wanted to do it to me …
Painter: Will you tell me how to be more beautiful?
Soo: (She wonders) Yes
Painter: Could you be my picture model when I’m on time? Then you’ll probably see you change. You can be more beautiful
Then the wind blew and the tent waved, and the leaf in her hand slipped out of her hand and carried over the sky.
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